Three things, in order of significance:

The value this creates/old methods it replaces wasn't communicated as concisely as it could be. This should be in the first sentence or two.

Check out fiverr or voice123 and get a professional voice recording. Polish = trust, and trust is important.

The lady in the green with the sign has no legs or feet. This is not a big deal.

Late to this, but thanks for the feedback RickS!

Pretty well done, what program/software did you use to make it?

Thanks! I used Videoscribe by Sparkol. In the end, I used their paid version, which provided high resolution and soundtrack integration, but their free trial is pretty comprehensive as well.